Comments on: I’m So Post Modern Lyric Writing Masterclass Page 2

By: Caley

Caley — Mon, 30 Aug 2010 09:43:20 +0000

I’m so post modern that I brought a mac book pro. Just to eat the logo in a yellow submarine.

By: Justin

Justin — Fri, 23 Apr 2010 10:53:46 +0000

I’m so post modern I reverse my binoculars, and go birdwatching for snakes.

By: will

will — Wed, 14 Apr 2010 11:07:17 +0000

I’m so post modern that i drank some ajax spray and wipe, now my stomach is burning, but at least im mould free.

By: Justin

Justin — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 10:42:34 +0000

Hola Lisa, keep writing. I don’t think these would make the cut. The start of the art class was promising, I wanted a better twist.

By: Lisa

Lisa — Sun, 05 Jul 2009 10:45:36 +0000

I’m so post modern that I took out my iron, and used it to make crinkles… in a geranium.

I’m so post modern that I started an art class, so when people turned up, I could tell them I’d died.

I’m so post modern that I tap dance at bus stops… in the nude.

By: Justin

Justin — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 11:26:00 +0000

Heya Simon,

Keep it up. I like the idea of freeing your breath at the beach.

By: Justin

Justin — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 11:25:42 +0000

Great stuff Jeremy, you’ve really excelled. You seem to have a good idea about the twist and the connections. I LOVE the outsourcing one. Very relevant and nice absurdity. The attention span is a great break out of character affair that an audience would dig.

By: Justin

Justin — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 11:23:24 +0000

Way to go Georgia, trying to create a new genre of post modern lyrics – you pioneer. How about Statica. It’s close to super-syntax in that it’s too long to fit into the metre, but has an extra unhinged element to it.

By: Justin

Justin — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 11:21:25 +0000

Thanks Elizabeth. These are fair standardinas. Keep up the good work!

By: Justin

Justin — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 11:20:39 +0000

I appreciate your desire to step outside the framework. It’s good to see you experimenting, as that is what this masterclass is all about.